How can I improve this article on treating bruxism?!
Question: http://www.helium.com/tm/480507/bruxism-...
Does anyone have any experience with these treatments, and first-hand knowledge of their success?
Answers: http://www.helium.com/tm/480507/bruxism-...
Does anyone have any experience with these treatments, and first-hand knowledge of their success?
Not sure what the guy above is talking about - the link worked. He might have ruined your chances at getting other answers, though.
I had heard of Bruxism, but didn't know what it was before I read that link; it's very well-written and informative! The only thing I would suggest is possibly breaking up the paragraphs a bit more (you know how finicky web readers can be).
It's a good deal better than others in that category; perhaps what they're looking for is a dumbed-down format? Not to be mean, but you sound like a doctor speaking to another doctor. ;) That's a compliment, but when it comes to the general public - they don't read like that.
Anyway, it deserves a better ranking than that - I really liked it.
The links you give, could they actual go somewhere?