Wot do u think?!
Question: Huddled in a corner.
My head in my hands.
Quietly sobbing so no know knows.
Couldn't stand the shame if anyone knew. If the secret got out.
Blood pouring down my arms.
Going numb on the inside.
Can't feel a thing.
My traumatized mind can't replace the images.
My childhood images.
The only way to escape the pain is to cut myself and let it out.
The fake family prorate.
Everyone smiling, pretending were happy.
People think if you look happy on the outside, you must be happy on the inside as well.
How wrong could they be?
No one knows what goes on behind closed doors.
Don't even think there'd care.
Imagine if they knew? what went on in that room.
On that bed, were the secrets first started. When my childhood was taken from me.
All the tears i cried. All the pain i beard inside.
The fake family prorate.
Answers: Huddled in a corner.
My head in my hands.
Quietly sobbing so no know knows.
Couldn't stand the shame if anyone knew. If the secret got out.
Blood pouring down my arms.
Going numb on the inside.
Can't feel a thing.
My traumatized mind can't replace the images.
My childhood images.
The only way to escape the pain is to cut myself and let it out.
The fake family prorate.
Everyone smiling, pretending were happy.
People think if you look happy on the outside, you must be happy on the inside as well.
How wrong could they be?
No one knows what goes on behind closed doors.
Don't even think there'd care.
Imagine if they knew? what went on in that room.
On that bed, were the secrets first started. When my childhood was taken from me.
All the tears i cried. All the pain i beard inside.
The fake family prorate.
wow this hits so close to home. i feel the exact same way. you are a good poet. THis poem helps me know that i am not alone , i hope you know that too
um..nice??!?
Wow cool poem. It's a bit dark but dark is cool!
Is this how u feel?
I think you were going for "portrait" instead of "prorate". Keep up the writing.
good poem!! But alittle dark.
I LOVE IT
**** bleeping this its ******* awesome
a little emo but alright i guess
That poem was brilliant you used emotive language really well.
By the way I think you meant "portrait"
Very good though *thumbs up*
Wow, I've read heaps of poem things in this mental health section, but that was the best. It was easy to understand.