What do you think of this poem? Please be honest.?!


Question: My world is dark, I cannot see
I am afraid of my own destiny.
I cry for help and there is no one near.
The scars on my arms tell of a painful past.
Each one has a story of its own.
When I go to bed at night, I do say my prayers
I ask God to please take my soul.
When I am gone and my memory does fade.
Please be kind to all of mankind.
Please do not be afraid, I mean you no harm.
Mental Illness is real it does not care who it takes.
So lend a hand to my fellow man, and maybe
One day you will make his day bright.

Dedicated to all those who have taken their own lives
May their souls be at rest, and may they walk in the light


Answers: My world is dark, I cannot see
I am afraid of my own destiny.
I cry for help and there is no one near.
The scars on my arms tell of a painful past.
Each one has a story of its own.
When I go to bed at night, I do say my prayers
I ask God to please take my soul.
When I am gone and my memory does fade.
Please be kind to all of mankind.
Please do not be afraid, I mean you no harm.
Mental Illness is real it does not care who it takes.
So lend a hand to my fellow man, and maybe
One day you will make his day bright.

Dedicated to all those who have taken their own lives
May their souls be at rest, and may they walk in the light

I think your poem is sad. It's great tho, but is that how you really feel inside? Do you know, you don't have to scar yourself, though you already did. I know someone who was scarred, but this time He was scarred for you. Nails were put through His hands and feet, and He shed His blood so you could live. He is the perfect Son of God, Jesus, and He died to take away the sins of the world. If you ask him to, He will wash your dark past away and give you a new and fulfilled life in Him. He did it for me, so I know!

the poem is great . im impress .

The world is full of cruelty
but it doesn't mean it will forever be.
How can you be gay and happy
If you long to fade away?

I was once like you my friend
I thought i have no one to depend.
But I stayed and continue to live
Now I know I was wrong in what I once believe.

If you prayed to God with all your might
Then you must know He is just there
Why do you ask Him to take you
When He died in the cross to save you.

The ones who decide to succumb in the
darkness of the night
Will never again feel the warmth of the sun
It is for you to know my friend that life
is never sorry for you and me.

Obstacles may challenge us mentally
You just have to think forcefully
I must live and be happy
Come what may.





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