PLZ HELP ME i cant take it any more?!

I think it is a GREAT start of a story!. I am a writer!. I wouldn't worry about what other people say or think!. They will be the ones working in fast food forever!. You will be the one with a great career in writing!!! Keep your chin up!. Email me if you need a shoulder!.Www@Answer-Health@Com

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Its good just finish it and people would like it better the people in your class just wishes they can wright as good as you!. When people make fun of me i punch them in the face and they didn't make fun of me again!. its true if you hit some one in the face they will no not make fun of youWww@Answer-Health@Com

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ok one - that story is better than anythin i could do
two- ive been where u are!.!.!. every day is hell!.!.!. still is sometimes!.!.!. if u need a chat give me an email or ad me to msn and i'll discuss stuff i tried to do to feel better!.!.!.
good luckWww@Answer-Health@Com

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Well your story is a real good start you might want to make your story a little bit longer and first of all tell your class mates to stop making fun of your story!.Www@Answer-Health@Com

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Sounds like a good start to me!. Keep writing! Don't kill yourself because of other peoples opinions on your book!. Write what you like to write!. Dont' worry about other people!.Www@Answer-Health@Com

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Um get over it!? if everyone said that beating off with a razor blade and drinking bleach is fun would you listin to them!?Www@Answer-Health@Com

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that is a good story maybe make it longer good job keep writing :)Www@Answer-Health@Com

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get over it lebron!.



(srry bad attempt at a pun =)Www@Answer-Health@Com

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Enjoy even the shortest second in your life, don't look at others, go through your life with smile and just"don't care" about people!. Life is too short to loose it just because of some stupid suckers who can do nothing with their life and will do everything to not let do anybody else something with his life!.
I am 22 now and I understand it too late to fix my mistakes and just LIVE!.
SO GO THEREAND JUST LIFT YOUR HEAD UP HIGH!Www@Answer-Health@Com

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wow ! you need to calm down and think what you are about to do and everything!. it is't healthly thinking about all the negatively happening in the world!.!.!. especiallity with your own self and everything!!.!.!.!. kids at school making fun of you is just there stupid way of just unboring thereselves and making everyone else feel morsalable along with them!. TRUST me I got made fun of all the time when I was in SCHOOL, just ignore them an finish your book and dont let anybody tell you different you are your own person and they are just looking out to scared you and make you feel uncomfortable about yourself!.!. okay! do what you got to do in life, and succeed and you'll be alrite, and if you need any help along the way your family or I am here!.!.!. contact me when you need help with something, An I'll always be with you !.Www@Answer-Health@Com

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there are actually alot of mistakes i think you need to revise and use better words!. with your word choice its no even a highschool reading level!. naturally by reading this i would have hoped for better word flow!. the words seem to not be mesh or playing off each other so to speak!. you have a lot of work cut out for you to make this decent!. when writing a story you want to be able to grab the readers attention!. maybe adding suspense!. remember to always have a conflict and resoultion aswell as a falling and rising action the story is lacking all of that and is in desperate need for a plot!. but i believe you can do it!. but you might want to research writing!.Www@Answer-Health@Com

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How old are you and why do people make fun of you!? And why did you make a book!? Was this a project!? If you are having these feelings, I really don't think a book will fix all of this!. You really need to talk to someone!. Do you have older brothers or sisters or can you talk to your parents!? Anyhow, here is the rest of the story!.!.!.it is similar to the one I sent to you a month ago (remember it got deleted!?)!. Anyhow, I hope it works for ya!. Let me know how you do!


I gave him a cold stare!.

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