Do you think this is good enough!

Question: Do you think this is good enough

to enter into a high school poetry competition!? (im 14/15 - in yr 10)

Title - Free Falling

Sometimes I feel so hollow, like the sun will never shine
Trapped in my chamber of mercy, I leave the world behind
I lay upon my bed and cry, my tear drops bound with fear
I look around for hint of life and realise no one
Answers:

wow, that's beautiful, really no joke!.
that's excactly how i feel, so this poem made me cry!

*wipes away a tear*

good luck, i really hope you win!

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Wow!. I think it is really good!. I like how it started dark and then became positive!. And I like how you started with the sun and being hopeless and ended with the sun and being hopeful!.

I say yes!.Www@Answer-Health@Com

That is a really REALLY good poem!. I think you should definitely enter the poem contest!!! And if you can't!.!.!. see if you can get it published! Www@Answer-Health@Com

I think it should be just It's mine instead of my time to shine!. It is really deep I can see your pain what a brilliant poem!Www@Answer-Health@Com

man, this poem is driving me to drink!Www@Answer-Health@Com

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