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Question: What do you thinkof these!?
i look out to see slim remnants of the sun still visible say bye
when the harsh drops peel from the sky
like miniscule beads of misery only waiting to escape
the torture and entrapment while up there they are taped
the withering nights bring mourning to your soul
similar to the tears escaping the clouds making you simply bawl
like a child of three
but sadness has no limit dont you see
the beatings and pain to your heart
repetative stabbing forcing you to part
from the world around you
the moments needed to consider are few
pondering is human nature
although abuse like this cannot be granted by an amateur
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black; a word of five letters with more meaning that the dictionary itself
the misery i cannot wait to place back on the newly dusted shelf
the moments to live are few
but the decisions you make are up to you
life will come to an end
no matter how good a person or how much they lend
the begining of life is never far from the stop
you are born in a cave and it is there where youll end, only the resulting cave will be you, swarmed with insects on top
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a glance in the mirror reveals myself
though not the person i dreamed of being
as a child you wish, you hope, you pray
that one day your dreams will come true
today i stand tall, accomplished what i can
yet some things, contrary to what others believe, are impossible
some prefer to mention improbable, yet the term used makes no difference
distinguishing between words that will be understood the same
one of the many things that waste your life away
look at your reflection, a quick glance tells it all
nobody is exactly what they imagined
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born as one, yet as diverse as human kind
conjoined in our spines, our legs, our hearts
what made strong, the person i am today
the thick scar running accross the outskirts of my body
outlining my legs, my torso, lets not forget the incision near my heart
today we are sepparate
yet alike all the same
the slim chance at survival we were given
the odds were against us, our middle names say it all
my dear sister, the only one i trust, the one i love, i desire
entrapped in a wheelchair for the first four years of life
myself sent to physical therapy daily
in hopes of walking one day
the struggles i faced
the ridicule i raced
made me strong and able to hope today
my heart bleeds at the sight of hurt, harassment, or anger
my sisters eyes, the key to her soul
together we stand, our family never far away
today we lead a seemingly normal life, despite from our heart conditions and dificulty walking long distance, our organ problems never far from our minds
i truly love my life, no matter the beliefs of others
conjoined from the start
together we will leave
though not physically connected
our hearts will always touch

plz be honest and tell me what you think!.!.!.
thanx guys!!! =)




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Answers:
WOW! Those are really good! Did you write those yourself!? Also, is the last one completely true!? You have some real talent!. my fav is the third one!. ;)Www@Answer-Health@Com

Sorry, way to long to read!.Www@Answer-Health@Com

Pretty good!. i really like the third part the most:

a glance in the mirror reveals myself
though not the person i dreamed of being
as a child you wish, you hope, you pray
that one day your dreams will come true
today i stand tall, accomplished what i can
yet some things, contrary to what others believe, are impossible
some prefer to mention improbable, yet the term used makes no difference
distinguishing between words that will be understood the same
one of the many things that waste your life away
look at your reflection, a quick glance tells it all
nobody is exactly what they imagined
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