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My girl is beautiful , she is fun
she is the light in my life just like the morning sun,
I love the way she brings her body close to me
the sweet sound of her breath,
the fragrance of her warm body
i love the way she splashes her shining hair across her face
it feels as if she has lit up the entire place
i love her walk
the way she
makes me mad
with her incessant talk
her eyes like ocean r very blue
she is very beautiful
yeah it's true
but now she's gone
i m very sad
baby please come back to me
i'll never be bad
i cry very loudly hoping she would hear my pain
baby please come back to me like monsoon rainWww@Answer-Health@Com


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you are so sweet and wonderful!.if a man wrote that to me i would love him for life!.make sure you give that to her!.she will cry and feel the forever bond between you have for eachother!.she sounds so special to you,sounds like you have found your wife!.tell herWww@Answer-Health@Com

It's beautiful but it only means something if you give it to her!. The worst thing that can happen is if she shuns you!. Then you write more and publish it!. You make beaucoux bucks and she loses a guy who loved her!. Life is tricky like that :)Www@Answer-Health@Com

sometimes less words meens more than a paragraph i prefer to right thi one for example:
The hardest thing to do is sit down beside you and look at you knowing that you will never be mine!."
good luck i will pray for youWww@Answer-Health@Com

not to the point where its deep and id favorite something like that, but it got me, and totally puts the beauty of the girl into prospect!.Www@Answer-Health@Com

i don't like this!.!.!.!.all of the analogies are cliche and tired!.!.!.!.try using fresher descriptions!.!.!.!.!.maybe think outside of your comfort zone!.!.!.books on creative writing techniques can be purchased at amazon!.com!.!.!.one is called writing better lyrics by pat bennisonWww@Answer-Health@Com

Awesome, kinda corny but hey some girls like thatWww@Answer-Health@Com

so sweetWww@Answer-Health@Com

rilly niceWww@Answer-Health@Com

you sound really whipped, dont sound that desperate or she'll never come backWww@Answer-Health@Com

woo ur a poet n u no it :) Www@Answer-Health@Com





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