What do you think? no rude comments please?!
Question: What do you think!? no rude comments please!?
i go to bed and in my head,
i just know he's going to come!.
for my dear old dad,has made me sad,
by playing house with me,
and you can bet,i cant forget,
all the things he's done to me!.
for he's robbeb me of my purity,
and he's stripped me of my pride,
he took me from my virignity,
and he ruined me inside!.
it makes no sence my innocence,
was forced to take a tragic fall!.
i dont know why but i know that i,
have become my daddy's doll!.
im so confused for ive been abused,
and i dont think he will stop!.
it sounds absurd but if i say a word,
i know ill get a pop
and ill have to lie about my eye,
when it is black and blue!.
i slipped and fell,i hurt like hell,
but what am i to do!?
i will do more harm if i tell my mom
becouse she'll think it's a lie!.
and for a fact,she'll tell me that
daddy is not the kind of guy!.
and becouse im young i bite my tounge
and tears begin to fall
i wonder why i have to cry,
and be my daddys dollWww@Answer-Health@Com
i just know he's going to come!.
for my dear old dad,has made me sad,
by playing house with me,
and you can bet,i cant forget,
all the things he's done to me!.
for he's robbeb me of my purity,
and he's stripped me of my pride,
he took me from my virignity,
and he ruined me inside!.
it makes no sence my innocence,
was forced to take a tragic fall!.
i dont know why but i know that i,
have become my daddy's doll!.
im so confused for ive been abused,
and i dont think he will stop!.
it sounds absurd but if i say a word,
i know ill get a pop
and ill have to lie about my eye,
when it is black and blue!.
i slipped and fell,i hurt like hell,
but what am i to do!?
i will do more harm if i tell my mom
becouse she'll think it's a lie!.
and for a fact,she'll tell me that
daddy is not the kind of guy!.
and becouse im young i bite my tounge
and tears begin to fall
i wonder why i have to cry,
and be my daddys dollWww@Answer-Health@Com
Answers:
OMG if you wrote this poem it touches my soul and heart!. It makes me cry so much man and I'm a guy, but then again I'm really sensitive!. So sad =(Www@Answer-Health@Com
first off that is an amazing poem!.!.
-and if this is real!.!. you should call the cops!. this is definately really scary but you need to do it for yourself,
you will be separated from him and he wont be able to hurt you again
you will be put with child services and they will believe you even if your mom wont-Www@Answer-Health@Com
-and if this is real!.!. you should call the cops!. this is definately really scary but you need to do it for yourself,
you will be separated from him and he wont be able to hurt you again
you will be put with child services and they will believe you even if your mom wont-Www@Answer-Health@Com
this is one of the best poems i have ever read im so so so sorry to hear this is this is true if it is you need to get help asap!. if you ever need to talk e-mail me at jlmsoccer013@aol!.comWww@Answer-Health@Com
that was really nice it sounds like it came from the heartWww@Answer-Health@Com
what a depressing, depressing tale!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
but if this is a story of your life, you should get help or something!. seeing that this is in mental health section!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
Do you REALLY want to know what I think!? You can't limit peoples feedback by saying no rude comments!. Either you want to be know or you don't!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
If this is a true story, I am sorry to hear that you have gone through something that devistating!.
Please talk to your school counselor or an adult that you *do* trust!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
Please talk to your school counselor or an adult that you *do* trust!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
oh my god, that was so good!
i dont know if that was a real true story, but if it is, please get help it's not your fault, you need to tell someone! (:Www@Answer-Health@Com
i dont know if that was a real true story, but if it is, please get help it's not your fault, you need to tell someone! (:Www@Answer-Health@Com
I think this is sad and if you;re a child and its still going on you should tell someone now !.
If you;re grown up and living with this each day you should get counceling!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
If you;re grown up and living with this each day you should get counceling!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
Aw! *hugs* :( ::: <-It's crying!.
Seriously, if what you say is true and about you GET HELP asap!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
Seriously, if what you say is true and about you GET HELP asap!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
i think you're being sexually harassed by your dad!.and you're afraid to tell it to your mom!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
well is it a poem or a song or what!? its sad!.!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
Very sad, hope it's not true, but very good for what you are portraying!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
whoah!.!.I don't know if you are writing from personal experience or what !.!.!.but if so!.!.!.please get help!.!.!.!.there are other people you can tell than your mom!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
Actually its very good!. Keep up with an open mind and you will go far in this crazy dull world!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
Damn!!.!.!.if you ever want to talk to somebody, talk to me!.!.!.!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
And your point is!?!?!?Www@Answer-Health@Com
Blah!!!!!!Www@Answer-Health@Com
did you really write tht!?!?!? ur really good!. i liked it a lotWww@Answer-Health@Com
If this is a true tale, which I suspect it is, I recommend getting help immediately!. See a school psychologist or counselor, they can help you sort out these issues and live life to the fullest, despite all your father does!. Another possible option is!.!.!.if you have any siblings who could testify for you, you could take the case to court and get away from your abusive father!.
If it's just a poem, it could use a little polishing, but otherwise is very well-written and emotional!. :)Www@Answer-Health@Com
If it's just a poem, it could use a little polishing, but otherwise is very well-written and emotional!. :)Www@Answer-Health@Com
thats really good, im hoping its not true!. thats a good poem though, its sadWww@Answer-Health@Com
That first answer is cruel - ignore it!.
It sounds like you are in a lot of pain and in a very confusing, scary place and you need help to get out of it!. Do you have a teacher, a friend, a doctor or any adult you can show this lovely poem to!? I think if this is written from your heart you Must get help!. Please do whatever you have to in order to get out of this situationWww@Answer-Health@Com
It sounds like you are in a lot of pain and in a very confusing, scary place and you need help to get out of it!. Do you have a teacher, a friend, a doctor or any adult you can show this lovely poem to!? I think if this is written from your heart you Must get help!. Please do whatever you have to in order to get out of this situationWww@Answer-Health@Com
reading, life experienceWww@Answer-Health@Com