What do you really think of this?!


Question: What do you really think of this?
So i've been trying to sleep and the gathering of all my luck has left me a few hours a day ago.

Everything is alright because the monster in my eyes leaves me with flowers on a hill.

I could go on for my life time talking and trying to make sense of things but i've descovered everything i think is a lie.

I talked and had these incredible feelings for so long, no words could describe just what what what.

I flew over the people and through the clouds, durring the time i felt love and peace with so much beauty.

I must have been caught in a storm of sorts and i must have gotten electricuted back to the things things.

When the wind settled me down back to where you walk, i lost my trains and scattered accross the ground.

I have to repeat the journey i've worked so hard to complete within one life time.

Years come like i've teleported into them with the speed of light.

Days come like your thoughts.

Dreams blow me kisses and place hands on my head.

Only doing so to torture my once tranquil mind feel.

Puzzles assort in the exact opposite of what they would be together fitting.

Serving me a dash of ripps, slips, clips, and flips that make you dizzy baby baby baby.


-------- what do you think of this? what do you really think? My sister... and blah blah blah......

Answers:

i think it's beautiful. It's very creative and imaginative....nothing wrong with it. This gives you an upperhand in the deck i think, because many do not have this....



I think this is beautiful.



its beautiful and you have a lot of great thoughts but you need to make it flow better




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