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History revision

Hitler and Nazi Germany
-Origin of the Nazi party
The German Worker's Party had its origins in post-war Bavaria. Anton Dexler formed it in Munich in 1919 as a radical right-wing party. Hitler initially joined the party as a government spy, but was soon converted to the party's beliefs. By 1923 Hitler had become the undisputed leader of the party. He changed the party's name to the National Socialist Germany Workers Party. They adopted swastika as their symbol. His fiery speeches, blaming the jews, democracy and the communists for Germany's ills, struck a cord with the general public. A defense band, the SA-assault division was created under the leadership of Ernst Rohm. This brown-shirted movement broke up left wing meetings and attacked anti-nazis and communists.
In my opinion, Hitler used very clever tactics to establish his rule. he wa backed up by SA security, eliminating what he disapproved of and had freedom to expand and spread his beliefs.
History revision
Definitions

Fascism
Fascist regimes placed a strong emphasis on nationalism and the absolute power of the state.
People were encouraged to work hard, not for themselves but for the good of the state.
Opposition parties, trade unions and elections were banned.

Herrenvolk- Master race
A belief that the Germans and other northern european people (Aryan) were members of a superior race
destined to rule over "lesser people".

Totalitarianism
Political system in which there is only one political party in total control of everything.

Propaganda
Informationa, often exaggerated or false, which is given out for a particular purpose, usually to spread
a particular doctrine or belief in order to influence the public.

Hitler and Nazi Germany
-Origin of the Nazi party
The German Worker's Party had its origins in post-war Bavaria. Anton Dexler formed it in Munich in 1919 as a radical right-wing party. Hitler initially joined the party as a government spy, but was soon converted to the party's beliefs. By 1923 Hitler had become the undisputed leader of the party. He changed the party's name to the National Socialist Germany Workers Party. They adopted swastika as their symbol. His fiery speeches, blaming the jews, democracy and the communists for Germany's ills, struck a cord with the general public. A defense band, the SA-assault division was created under the leadership of Ernst Rohm. This brown-shirted movement broke up left wing meetings and attacked anti-nazis and communists.
In my opinion, Hitler used very clever tactics to establish his rule. he wa backed up by SA security, eliminating what he disapproved of and had freedom to expand and spread his beliefs.


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Adolf Hitler Essay
ADOLF HITLER ESSAY 8
Defeat in WWI shocked the German people. Despair increased as the army returned to a bankrupt country. Millions of Germans could find no jobs. A weak republic had replaced the defeated empire.
After the war Hitler returned to Munich and joined a small nationalist group called the German Workers' Party. In 1920 this group changed its name to the Nationalist Socialist German Workers' Party, which became known as the Nazi Party. The Nazis called for the union into one nation of all Germans, including those in other countries. They favored the creation of a strong central government and cancellation of the Versailles Treaty.
Hitler was a skillful schemer, politician, and organizer. He became a leader of the Nazis and built up party membership quickly. Hitler attacked the government, and declared that only the Nazi party could assure jobs for the workers and greatness for Germany. He also organized a private army of men who became known as Storm Troopers...

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