GUYS, does this sound realistic...?!
Question: GUYS, does this sound realistic!.!.!.!?
I have to write a modern day fairy tale for my english class!.
a guy and a girl are at the YMCA!. the way the Y is built, there's a basketball court and a track that wraps around it!. the guy is there playing basketball!. the girl is there because her friend wants to lose weight!. the girl and her friend are being silly and having fun!. the girl has a soda and some chips with her while she's running and offers some to her friend and her friend just looks at her then keeps going!. the girl turns around and the guy is staring at her!. she's never had eye contact like that before!. "Is it some special thing he can do or is it some special thing!.!.!.!.!? she wonders!. he stares at her but she keeps looking away!. one time she holds eye contact and he looks away!. he won't look her in the eyes after that!. she leaves with her friend!. the next time they see eachother is a year later at high school!. when the guy first saw the girl she was friendly, funny, and vivacious!. now she's depressed, anti social, rude, skips class, and is mean to people!. he asked some of his friends about her and they said they "knew her in middle school!. she's really nice!. she makes straight A's!. she's a good girl!.!.!." he becomes intrigued by her behavior and wants to know who she really is!. he stares at her and when she looks back, he looks away like she's not even there (lol)!. 9th grade is over!. it's summer time and the girl is convinced that he doesn't like her anymore!. the first day of school (10th grd!.) she's trying to find her classes and she looks up and he's staring at her with that deep, long gaze!. she kind of stops thinking "wow!. it's been a year!.!.!.why would you even like me" then keeps walking!. they have no classes together but every time he sees her in the hallways, he stares at her in that deep, long, once in a while if that kind of way!. she's really shy and doesn't talk to anyone in class!. he's on the football team, basketball team, and track team!. she asks one of her friends about him and her friend says "he's too into sports for me!. I saw him kissing a girl at lunch" it's the last day of school and it's just the guy, the girl, and one of the guy's friends in the hallway!. he's staring at her like that again!. she looks at him confused then looks straight ahead like he's not even there!. he takes it as rejection and is hurt!. 11th grade: he acts like she's not there and looks angry around her!.!.!.
and that's all I've got!.
What do you think!?
Do you think a guy could ever really feel that way about a girl!? I'm trying to make it sound like a fairy tale but possible!. I appreciate feedback!Www@Answer-Health@Com
a guy and a girl are at the YMCA!. the way the Y is built, there's a basketball court and a track that wraps around it!. the guy is there playing basketball!. the girl is there because her friend wants to lose weight!. the girl and her friend are being silly and having fun!. the girl has a soda and some chips with her while she's running and offers some to her friend and her friend just looks at her then keeps going!. the girl turns around and the guy is staring at her!. she's never had eye contact like that before!. "Is it some special thing he can do or is it some special thing!.!.!.!.!? she wonders!. he stares at her but she keeps looking away!. one time she holds eye contact and he looks away!. he won't look her in the eyes after that!. she leaves with her friend!. the next time they see eachother is a year later at high school!. when the guy first saw the girl she was friendly, funny, and vivacious!. now she's depressed, anti social, rude, skips class, and is mean to people!. he asked some of his friends about her and they said they "knew her in middle school!. she's really nice!. she makes straight A's!. she's a good girl!.!.!." he becomes intrigued by her behavior and wants to know who she really is!. he stares at her and when she looks back, he looks away like she's not even there (lol)!. 9th grade is over!. it's summer time and the girl is convinced that he doesn't like her anymore!. the first day of school (10th grd!.) she's trying to find her classes and she looks up and he's staring at her with that deep, long gaze!. she kind of stops thinking "wow!. it's been a year!.!.!.why would you even like me" then keeps walking!. they have no classes together but every time he sees her in the hallways, he stares at her in that deep, long, once in a while if that kind of way!. she's really shy and doesn't talk to anyone in class!. he's on the football team, basketball team, and track team!. she asks one of her friends about him and her friend says "he's too into sports for me!. I saw him kissing a girl at lunch" it's the last day of school and it's just the guy, the girl, and one of the guy's friends in the hallway!. he's staring at her like that again!. she looks at him confused then looks straight ahead like he's not even there!. he takes it as rejection and is hurt!. 11th grade: he acts like she's not there and looks angry around her!.!.!.
and that's all I've got!.
What do you think!?
Do you think a guy could ever really feel that way about a girl!? I'm trying to make it sound like a fairy tale but possible!. I appreciate feedback!Www@Answer-Health@Com
Answers:
Sounds a bit over the top:make some adjustments!.
Then you get your srtraight A!.
Space!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
Then you get your srtraight A!.
Space!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
i guess its pretty realistic, i somereason got into it, but why would you waste your life writing it here when hardly anyone will look at this, spend time making it as best as it can!.!.!.::::::::::!.!.!.!. MENS HEALTH!?Www@Answer-Health@Com
Im not readin this its too longWww@Answer-Health@Com
Here we go again X lolWww@Answer-Health@Com
If WE guys help you get an A - isn't that a form of 'cheating!?' I would think you need to use your own intuition & imagination to finalize your story & take your chances of getting a good grade!. You really can't go thru life expecting other people to help make your decisions for you!. That's the easy way!. Doing it the hard way is the right way!.
Sorry! No help here!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
Sorry! No help here!.Www@Answer-Health@Com