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Question: The Study of the Knowledge of Cancer for University Students
The objective of this study is to analyze the knowledge of cancer among the university students. 100 copies of questionnaires were given to undergraduates in department of MIS and Medical Laboratory Science and Biotechnology of an University in central Taiwan. In this study, we used SPSS for windows 12.0 as a tool to analyze the data. 78 percent of students consider disease are related to cancer. 72 percent of students consider cancer come from bad health habit and 67 percent of students do no know the methods for treatment of cancer. 53 percent of students consider liver cancer is the No.1 cancer in Taiwan. Findings from this study shows that most students know the connection between health and cancer. They do not know how to do medical treatment for cancer, so it is necessary to make more promotion to let people know the correct concept of cancer.
Answers: The Study of the Knowledge of Cancer for University Students
The objective of this study is to analyze the knowledge of cancer among the university students. 100 copies of questionnaires were given to undergraduates in department of MIS and Medical Laboratory Science and Biotechnology of an University in central Taiwan. In this study, we used SPSS for windows 12.0 as a tool to analyze the data. 78 percent of students consider disease are related to cancer. 72 percent of students consider cancer come from bad health habit and 67 percent of students do no know the methods for treatment of cancer. 53 percent of students consider liver cancer is the No.1 cancer in Taiwan. Findings from this study shows that most students know the connection between health and cancer. They do not know how to do medical treatment for cancer, so it is necessary to make more promotion to let people know the correct concept of cancer.
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The Study of the Knowledge of Cancer for University Students
The objective of this study is to analyze the knowledge of cancer among university students. The questionnaire was given to 100 undergraduates in department of MIS and Medical Laboratory Science and Biotechnology of a University in central Taiwan. In this study, we used SPSS for windows 12.0 as a tool to analyze the data. 78 percent of students consider disease to be related to cancer. 72 percent of students consider cancer to come from bad health habits and 67 percent of students do not know the methods for treatment of cancer. 53 percent of students believe that liver cancer is the No.1 cancer in Taiwan. The study findings show that most students know the connection between health and cancer. They do not know the proper medical treatment for cancer, so it is necessary to make more promotion to let people know the correct concept of cancer.