Is this good way of my mystery Essay of saying how my guy died? Or is there a be!
Question: As Cole took a drink of his water. Cole started to make this gagging noise. Then he held his throat, gasping for air, screaming. Cole stopped breathing his eyes closed, and he stumbled to the ground face first. . Everything went quiet. You could hear the sweat of the players hit the ground.
Answers: As Cole took a drink of his water. Cole started to make this gagging noise. Then he held his throat, gasping for air, screaming. Cole stopped breathing his eyes closed, and he stumbled to the ground face first. . Everything went quiet. You could hear the sweat of the players hit the ground.
As Cole took a drink of his water. He began making a gagging noise. He held his throat, gasped for air, and a silent scream came about him. Cole stopped breathing his eyes closed, (ppl dont usually die with their eyes closed unless they asleep and died) and he fell to the ground face first. . Everything fell silent. You could hear the sweat of the players hit the ground.
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Wow sounds good to me i would never be able to do that...lol
"As Cole took a drink of his water. Cole started to make THIS gagging noise. 'Then he held his throat, gasping for air, screaming.' Cole stopped breathing his eyes closed, and he stumbled to the ground face first. . Everything went quiet. You could hear the sweat of the players hit the ground."
Delete the capitalized THIS. Grammars a little off too. I put the things that I'm not sure of in ' ' 's.
Its great though! Fantastic job!!! :)