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Question: This research explores to install a teaching system of PACS provideing students an effective teaching environment to study and practice First to explore the framework of teaching system then analysis and develope PACS system based on client server framework and SQL Server is used as database. The image of X-ray, Mammography simulator and Dental x-ray simulator from department of radiological technology is digitized and stored in the SQL Server database in MIS department and then it can be displayed in view station in school with installed view station. The student can choose image to exercise. The teachers can ask the students to show the images according the parameters setting. After the practice the students can familiar the operation procedure as in hospital. The teaching system of PACS can provide the students of department of radiological technology, MIS, nursing and healthcare administration a good practice environment before to work in the hospital system.


Answers: This research explores to install a teaching system of PACS provideing students an effective teaching environment to study and practice First to explore the framework of teaching system then analysis and develope PACS system based on client server framework and SQL Server is used as database. The image of X-ray, Mammography simulator and Dental x-ray simulator from department of radiological technology is digitized and stored in the SQL Server database in MIS department and then it can be displayed in view station in school with installed view station. The student can choose image to exercise. The teachers can ask the students to show the images according the parameters setting. After the practice the students can familiar the operation procedure as in hospital. The teaching system of PACS can provide the students of department of radiological technology, MIS, nursing and healthcare administration a good practice environment before to work in the hospital system.

run spell check

I am not too sure on how to interpret the first sentence it might need a comma or something.

Should there be a full stop after practice?

2nd line ' First to explore the framework of THE teaching system ' - the is required to make a bit more sense

not too sure what you mean by 'SQL Server is used as A database.- - might need 'a' in it

displayed in THE view station in school

Hope this helps..... this is all I could find!!!





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