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Question: Luke Matherson had it all a good life, an awesome family and a perfect girlfriend. That all changes when He starts having really weird symptoms. He has really bad night sweats and is always feeling sick. Whats wrong with him? They need to find out before it's too late.
Answers: Luke Matherson had it all a good life, an awesome family and a perfect girlfriend. That all changes when He starts having really weird symptoms. He has really bad night sweats and is always feeling sick. Whats wrong with him? They need to find out before it's too late.
OOOH! Yes.. Tell me more!
As long as they're interested it's good. And I'm interested.
yeah but it could maybe lose one of the last 2 questions asked
Luke Matherson had it all. A good happy life, a nice, loving girlfriend, and a caring family. Then all of a sudden everything changed. Luke began have extremly bad symptoms. He was having horrible night sweats, and was always feeling sick. What was wrong with him? They needed find out, before it was too late.
try that ^^
To tell you the truth, you have some grammar problems. Also, this is pretty short and had very little information (or "meat") unless you are planning to add more to it. But overall, it was pretty decent. Below, i rewrote it...
"Luke Matherson had it all: a good life, an awesome family and a perfect girlfriend. That all changed when he started having really weird symptoms. He had really bad night sweats and was always feeling sick. What was wrong with him? They needed to find out before it was too late."