Constructive feedback on report intro?!
Question: Constructive feedback on report intro!?
Hi,am slightly embarrassed that I need to ask help here but here it goes!.I am finishing a report on clinical project,almost done but I need constructive feedback on my introduction!. It's about 5 pages with double spacing!.Anybody interested!?10 points for best pointers!
the file is at http://rapidshare!.com/files/112790980/re!.!.!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
the file is at http://rapidshare!.com/files/112790980/re!.!.!.Www@Answer-Health@Com
Answers:
The introduction is very well written and really sets the stage for the information that you are providing!. In the fifth paragraph, pre operative should really have a hypen it should be pre-operative or preoperative according to dictionary!.com I have included the link in source!. Other than that, I don't see any problems with it all!.
Actually in reading it thoroughly I found it to be very easy to understand for a clinical paper and the only problem that I can see is that you need to include footnotes for the sources that you cited in the paper!. I didn't see any in the document downloaded from Rapidshare!.
However from what I see, and I carefully read the entire document; you have done a great job on it!.
It looks good in my opinion and it very thorough!.
I hope that helps!
MichelleWww@Answer-Health@Com
Actually in reading it thoroughly I found it to be very easy to understand for a clinical paper and the only problem that I can see is that you need to include footnotes for the sources that you cited in the paper!. I didn't see any in the document downloaded from Rapidshare!.
However from what I see, and I carefully read the entire document; you have done a great job on it!.
It looks good in my opinion and it very thorough!.
I hope that helps!
MichelleWww@Answer-Health@Com